Day 555

Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Work from 9-2.  Working on revisions to True Colors, adding more definition to Lauren and Lani.  When Lani sees people's true colors, her fingers quiver, her eyes widen and her ears move up and down.  Lauren knows this.  The sights Lani sees are much more detailed and varied.  The first five chapters are completely reordered.  Lauren's mom is now the Oakland detective and Lani's father works for the FBI in the cyber crime division.  Lauren's father is the entrepreneur and Lani's mom is still a book editor for a small Berkeley publishing house.

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